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My Dream
A Writing Competition For High School Students 
in the Fairfield Area, Sydney, Australia

Karen Huynh - First Prize (Junior Group)

A dream is something we yearn to make come true.

My dream is something that I have not achieved yet but I will always put my hopes on it.

As a young child I used to have problems with the Eustachian tube and my parents used to always bring me to the hospital. There a doctor treated me until my pains were gone.

When I went home I thought how could a person’s hand be so skilful. I asked my mother and she explained to me how a person must learn in order to achieve something of a high standard.

By then I decided that my future career must be in the medical world. But I haven’t decided the specific occupation in which I wanted to learn.

Later when I grew up, my mother started having problems with her neck whilst my father had problems with his back.

My auntie-a physiotherapist then came and massaged my parents until they felt better.

But as my auntie was very busy, she taught me a few techniques to help my parents. As I tried these massages on them, I discovered that they liked it a lot.

By then I knew what my future career was, a physiotherapist.

Trying to be physiotherapist not only requires being smart but also the ability to learn. So I went and studied hard, I gathered every information that came to view. I asked questions which I needed to know and read everything that came into contact.

My first aim was to make into O.C, which stood for Opportunity Class. And also to make it into Selective. These two things have one thing in common. They contain bright students who compete with each other. I also wanted to make it into these places as I can learn from many other talented students as well.

When it was the O.C testing date, I felt so confident that I knew that I was going to make it for sure. The test was so easy since I learnt everything before. Although I cut my finger on the test paper my determination pushed me on and by the time the test was finished, I felt as ‘fresh as a daisy.’

I waited in anticipation for months.

One day when I came to school, I heard all my classmates saying that they had all received their O.C testing results and they had all failed. I thought to myself:

“Could I have been the only person in my class that made it.”

The day dragged by so slowly. I kept glancing at the school clock to see if it was home time yet.

Finally the bell rang for the students to be dismissed. I rushed home as ‘fast as a bullet’ not even stopping to catch my breath.

When I came home I was all red and sweaty. I swung open the door and jumped inside the house. And to my amazement, no- body was home. Where had everybody gone? I stood there thinking. Just as suddenly as it all began, everyone jumped out from all these hiding places screaming ‘SURPRISE!’ I jumped with astonishment. What in the world was happening?

After a while of standing there with a confused expression on my face, I suddenly remembered about the O.C results. Why did everyone scream surprise? Is isn’t my birthday and neither is it anyone’s birthday?

Then amongst the crowd of happy faces, my mother then came up and said:

“ Congratulations Karen, you have received a placement for the O.C at Harrington Street Public School.”

I screamed with excitement. I cried with joy. I couldn’t believe that I made it.

Then suddenly the phone rang. It was a friend of mine that was absent on that day. She said that she also made it into O.C and into the same school as well.

The next year, I went to my new school. Accompanied by my mother, I went into my class. We all had to introduce ourselves and the teacher gave us seating arrangements. She put us to sit near the people that came from the same school.

The year went by very quickly and I made more and more friends.

By the time the next year rolled on I had made friends with all the people in my class. But we had a different teacher this year and he gave us a lot of speeches to do.

When the middle of the year came, I applied for a scholarship at a well-known school- M.L.C.

The day of the test arrived and as I stood waiting outside the testing room, I heard how all these students, carrying on about how hard the test was and how hard the Written Expression was.

I didn’t take any notice of them, and when I went and did the test I thought that I could’ve scored a 100 out of 100. Although my parents told me that it was very hard to make it, as I am not a student at their school plus the fact that I haven’t learnt essay writing before.

Again, I waited and waited until the results arrived. Until, one day my mum was carrying an envelope with “M.L.C” written on it. Shakily, I pulled out the envelope and it said that I had received a scholarship at the school.

Next, was the Selective Test. I studied as hard as ever. I answered all the questions on the day and I came out with a big grin. I waited for the results for ages, and I still am!

But I hope I’ll make it.

In the future, I hope that I could achieve my dream. I want to help the community, with whatever ability I have. The community could be applied to elderly who have arthritis, joint problems, etc. It could also be applied to children and adults who have problems such as sitting down with pain, neck pain, etc.

I would also like to interact with sportsman as well, especially famous athletes. It would a wonderful experience and you would never know what you might learn out of it.

So as I would like to conclude my essay, I have a final point. As I was looking up the word DREAM in the dictionary the other day, it defined the word as an inspiration. But I would define the word DREAM as an aim that we try to achieve at the best of our ability.

 

 
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