2002 August Moon Festival - Australia


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My Dream
A Writing Competition For High School Students 
in the Fairfield and Liverpool Area, Sydney, Australia

Valentina Cupac - Consolation Prize

Light of the day

 With a smile on her rosy face, she entered the forest. The young child sat on a log suspiciously, shifting her light pink dress onto the sides of her skinny body. Her lovely blonde hair swirled about friskily, as if it had freedom of its own. In a puzzling way, she fixed her gaze at the cloudless sky above. Her figure almost danced in the breeze. If only she could fly… If only she could jump on the moon.. If only she could go where ever she pleased…

The mid-winter sun shore, attempting to warm up the chilly air. Damp wind carried the sweet smell of scented flowers, whispering mysteriously to the trees.

It was just after midday, but the glorious weather remained balmy. The leaves rustled continuously overhead, dancing to the same unknown rhythm, but never bowing to the audience beneath. At the same time, each shared its rightful place in the hands of Mother Nature.

The forest was filled with enchanting plants, rich in colour. They all stood peacefully, surrounded by an endless sea of smooth grass. The cracked surface of the trees felt coarse under her hands, similar to the spindly leaves of evergreen trees.

The night was almost moonless and dark, with a chilly wind blowing from the south. A low owl’s boot echoed through the lofty trees, while the frail moonlight wove itself around the thin branches. Lakes nearby shimmered, revealing their glory.

Hephzibah leaned against the roots of an oak tree, starring at the ground. Her extensive claret veil covered most of her slim body, outlining the slight curves. Without warning, abrupt raindrops attacked the hillside, while rapid dim billows hid the moon from her view.

Hephzibah shivered as she raced for nearby shelter, drawing her cloak closed across her chest. A chilly gale stroke her pale face, sweeping the decaying leaves transversely.

Rigid with tension, Hephzibah crouched against the jagged rock. She made a longed for, tepid fire, which flicked unsteadily. Hephzibah took off her exquisitely garmented veil, illuminating her wrinkled ageing pastel face and a weak frown on her dry unspoken lips. Grey hair flowed without restrained over her fragile shoulders, following the form of her waist.

The hollow walls of the cave encircled her, leaving a crevice on the northern side, which served as a door. The tunnel was dank from lack of sun shine and fresh air.

Her deep thoughts seemed to engulf her completely from the reality surrounding her. The frown vanished. With a quick glance, her eyes exposed a gleam.

Outside her shelter, the winds roared. Rains wiped the grounds, leaving them bare and soil less.

The child stared out, through the window. She was able to feel, the moisture in the atmosphere due to the rain. Patricia could still remember last night; the thunderous winds, the sound of the drizzle… Wouldn’t it have been exciting to run like lightning across the landscape?

Bizarre images rushed into her head, making her dizzy.  The world around her blended into one, undistinguishable figure, which stretched towards Patricia.  She was taken in by an unknown force, blurring her vision once more.  Her heart thumped with fear and panic.  Two eyes started at her, not letting her go, giving her an impression of something being demanded of her...

 It was all over.  Everything happened in the split of a second.  Her head was still hurting, although she didn’t mind.  But the origin of the flash still troubled her and she couldn’t make any sense of it. 

 Heat rushed into her face.  “No, not again!”  Nevertheless, her scream came out as a sigh, as she penetrated the new terrain once more.

 The air was warm an stuffy.  It was getting hotter, as the day continued to develop.  the blazing sun was soaring in the sky, towering over the Earth like an emperor.

Occasionally, the wind from the sea escaped through narrow spaces among the shrubbery.

 Hephzibah stumbled ahead, sweating and burning under her rags.  The grass tickled her feet and small insects bit her skin.  Her footsteps became slower and weaker, until she was completely exhausted.

 “Mum!...”  Tired, bewildered by her own insights, Patricia lay still, feeling tense and confused, unable to recall what had happened to her.   She collected all her energy to remain alert, but the darkness and empty space roused her.

Soon, she became aware of a woman standing beside her, massaging her palm.  Gentle hands touched a tender spot on her head.  “Darling, darling.  Mum’s here.  Are you all right?  Oh, it must’ ve been a nightmare.” 

The words floated in the air, carried away by a gush of wind.  Patricia realised the window was open.   A cool current of air hit her flaming cheeks.

 There was a knock on the door.  “I’ll be back...”  The echo reached Partricia.   She stirred about, in discomfort, burying her face into her arms.

“Good morning,” exclaimed Patricia’s mum, surprised at the visitor.

“Good morning to you,” replied the old lady.  “I’m Hephzibah and I must talk to your daughter.”  Without an invitation, she hurried inside, past Patricia’s mum.  In an instant, she was next to Patricia’s bed, holding her hand.

“My child, I must help you get rid of this sickness.”  Patricia swung around, shrugging indifferently.  Her eyes gazed at the elderly woman, as if there was some hope in that wrinkled beam.  “I know a way, but it has to be tonight.  Meet me by the lake,” she whispered faintly.

She was gone.

At each step, her aching head jolted back devastatingly.  The shadowy figure of Patricia crept stealthily, further to the north.  She rushed beyond the narrow belt of trees.  Eventually, the lake was within her view.

Hephzibah appeared in her long mysterious veil.   She beckoned Patricia to come over.  “Look in the lake,” she murmured and pointed her long finger towards the shimmering water.

Patricia paced through the silky meadow.  Her eyes widened with shock and panic as she grasped the image reflected on the surface of the lake.  She twisted in the opposite direction, facing the slopes.  Gripping her long half-grey curls and sliding her fingers across her crumpled face, she darted through bushes and trees, up a sheer, pebbly hummock, howling, yelling, and pleading to die, until she tripped over an undersized stone.

Hephzibah loped over to Patricia, who cursed herself.  “Please,” she sobbed, “Please let me die!  Do you understand?!  I don’t want live!  this is not my place!”  Patricia placed her finger on the earth, dragging it.

After a while, Hephzibah looked Patricia in the eye.  “If you die... then I die.”  For an instant, they both became silent.  Patricia stopped moaning and stared at the old lady.  “We are one,” she continued, “I am me and you ... and you are you and me, the same as the earth, air, water and fire are all one.”

Her face relaxed when she sensed the understanding that passed between them.  The cries of small insects disturbed the peace and the tranquility of the night, which swam around them, like calm, soothing waters of the lake.

Suddenly uneasy, Hephzibah touched Patricia’s hand.  “You still have the chance to save us and restore our youth...”

Patricia glided her fingers across the mountain’s surface.  She paced across the middle of the hall, sighing at the sight of the fabulous marble columns and beautifully carved statues.  Cool air her immediately, bringing sudden relief to her wary figure.  The detailed iron latticework mesmerised Partricia, leaving her whole body immobile with pleasure.

“My dead brother!?...  My dead sister!?...  How?  Why?”  Her screech was lost in the footsteps of the advancing lifeless young people.  Their pale, hard faces exposed nothing.  They stared sullenly into the darkness.

As they drew nearer, Patricia’s heartbeat increased.  With all her strength, she pressed clear of them and hid behind a fountain.  On the antique stone surrounding it, an engraved star glowed, producing a dim light.

A young woman, with a beautiful, but sinister appearance stepped forward.  “You can, but you can’t hire from me.”  Her baleful smile was met by Patricia’s grin, as she stepped forward to confront her enemy.

Coldness struck the mountain.  The wind howled through its rugged curtains, which swayed back and forth.  It outstretched its cheerless hands to any victim passing by.  It waited there, silent and still.

It was frigid inside.  Patricia’s hands kept shaking as she paced along the stone-made floor.  The walls consisted of stones, too.  The large room was motionless, just as its victims.

Patricia breathed in, trying to stay calm and relaxed.  She was aware of the hatred and greed that existed in those two clear blue eyes.  “I love you as much as myself.”  the adolescent woman disappeared.  The gentle words of Patricia burnt her.

The young lifeless people, along with Patricia regained their stolen, youth, finally finding the light of the day.  Their laughs vibrated across the land.

 

 
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